【题目】假定你是李华，在校报看到了一则招聘启事，请阅读启事，并根据写作要点写一封应聘邮件。
写作要点：1. 表明写信意图；2. 陈述应聘目的；3. 说明应聘条件（英语好、能熟练操作电脑、有奉献精神和服务意识等）。
要求：内容向上，语意连贯，结构完整,书写工整，字数100左右。
Dear Ms. Chen,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 21, Grade 2. _______________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
在线课程【答案】
Dear Ms. Chen,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 21, Grade 2. I’m writing to apply for the position as an English editor of the School Paper.
I am really eager to obtain this precious opportunity. As an outgoing girl, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as an assistant to my English teacher. Additionally, I am adept in operating the computer, which enables me to have an evident advantage over many others. Above all, I am more than glad to devote myself to serving my fellow students as much as possible.
I am pretty sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I would appreciate it if you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：本次作文要求假定你是李华，在校报看到了一则招聘启事，请阅读启事，并根据写作要点写一封应聘邮件。成文时要注意：1.文章主要用第一人称；2.时态：一般现在时为主；3.文章的内容要点要齐全：1. 表明写信意图；2. 陈述应聘目的；3. 说明应聘条件（英语好、能熟练操作电脑、有奉献精神和服务意识等）。；4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；5.注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制，120单词左右。7.不能使用原文语句。
写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了obtain, outgoing, adept in, live up to, devote myself to, Looking forward to等词汇及Additionally, Above all等连接词。另外还用了表语从句I am pretty sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.和宾语从句 I would appreciate it if you could give me a kind consideration.