假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I still remember what happened to my deskmate and me in Grade One. She did well in math tests, which I often laughed at. At last it aroused her anger but she decided to turn her back on me. As the result, I was refused when I needed her help. My friends began to play fun of me about it. Feeling ashamed, I asked her for forgiveness for what I had done wrongly and promised not to do. She agreed to make friends with me again. And from then on I get along well with my friends, keeping the lesson in mind.

With an old saying goes, ＂Do to others as you would have them to do to you.＂ My experience tells me that only when we respect others can we gain other’s respect.

【答案】

I still remember what happened to my deskmate and me in Grade One. She did in math tests, which I often laughed at. At last it aroused her anger she decided to turn her back on me. As result, I was refused when I needed her help. My friends began to fun of me about it. Feeling ashamed, I asked her for forgiveness for what I had done and promised not to do. She agreed to make friends with me again. And from then on I along well with my friends, keeping the lesson in mind.

an old saying goes, ＂Do to others as you would have them to do to you.＂ My experience tells me that only when we respect others can we gain respect.

【解析】

第一处：此处是说她数学考得不好，应该用副词poorly修饰动词did，故把well改为poorly。

第二处：此处表示顺承而不是转折，故把but改为and。

第三处：as a result表示＂结果＂，故把the改为a。

第四处：make fun of表示＂嘲笑＂，故把play改为make。

第五处：wrong的副词形式就是wrong，表示＂错误地＂，故把wrongly改为wrong。

第六处：此处是说不再这么做，故在do后面加so。

第七处：讲的是发生在过去的事情，应该用一般过去时，故把get改为got。

第八处：as a saying goes表示＂俗语道＂，故把With改为As。

第九处： have sb do sth表示＂让某人做某事＂，故把do前面的to去掉。

第十处：others’表示＂他人的＂，故把other’ s改为others’。