【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有
10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处
加一个漏字符号(
),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Tina and I had been good friend for years. We often did things together, so one day Tina didn’t talk to me and just sat by herself. I don’t know what was wrong. I thought about what I had done and said recent. Was Tina upset because I had done well in the history test than her? No, she was happy that I did well in school. I decided find out what was the matter. I walked over to there Tina was sitting. “Tina,” I said softly, “is anything wrong?” He answered sadly, “Yes, my cat died on last night.” I finally knew the reason what she didn’t talk to me and comforted her.
在线课程【答案】Tina and I had been good
for years. We often did things together,
one day Tina didn’t talk to me and just sat by herself. I
know what was wrong. I thought about what I had done and said
. Was Tina upset because I had done
in the history test than her? No, she was happy that I did
in school. I decided
find out what was the matter. I walked over to
Tina was sitting. “Tina,” I said softly, “is anything wrong?”
answered sadly, “Yes, my cat died on last night.” I finally knew the reason
she didn’t talk to me and comforted her.
【解析】1.句意:Tina和我是多年的好朋友。根据句意可知此处名词用复数形式,故把friend改成friends。
2.此句是一个并列句,上半句意思是“我们经常一起做事情”,下半句“一天Tina不和我说话,只是独自坐着”。可知表示一种转折关系,故把so改成but。
3.句意:我不知道哪错了。根据上文可知用一般过去时态,故把don’t改成didn’t。
4.句意:我最近考虑我做过的事和说过的话。副词修饰动词,故把recent改成recently。
5.根据后面的than可知此处用比较级,故把well改成better。
6.固定搭配:decide to do sth.决定做某事,故decided
find out。
7.句意:我走到Tina坐的地方。此处是where引导的地点状语从句,故把there改成where。
8.根据上文可知Tina是一个女孩,故把He---She。
9.句意:我的猫可能死了。此处on是多余的,故去掉。
10.此处是一个包含定语从句的复合句,the reason是先行词,在后面的定语从句中做原因状语,故把what---why。