【题目】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(
)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Recently, many people have participated about a heated online debate over whether to send the old to nursing homes. People differ in their opinion. Here list the ideas of those who in favor of it. Living in nursing homes, which they say, old people can enjoy more benefits than staying at home. For one aspect, they can have more chances of communicate with each other, as they have common topics and similar hobbies. However, they can do many things together and don't feel alone. Some old people prefer living in a nursing home to live at home, saying “We may quarrel with ourselves children because of the generation gap”. Another aspect, which is highly valued, is that the old people can have regular professional medical care from doctors.
在线课程【答案】
【1】about - in
【2】opinion – opinions
【3】who in – who are in 或in
【4】which they say – as they say
【5】of communicate – to communicate/ of communicating/ of communication
【6】However –Therefore
【7】alone – lonely
【8】to live – to living
【9】ourselves – our
【10】the old people – old people
【解析】
试题分析:本文属于议论文,讨论了老年人住进养老院的优势,提倡老年人进入养老院享受更多的生活。
【1】about - in 考查固定搭配。短语participate in参加;句意:最近,很多人都参加了一个热烈的讨论。
【2】opinion – opinions 考查名词单复数。名词opinion观点,是一个可数名词,前面有their修饰,说明是很多人的不同观点,所以使用复数形式opinions。
【3】who in – who are in 或in 考查句子结构。原文中who in favor of it并不是一个完整的句子,要在who后面加are构成完整的句子。
【4】 which they say – as they say 考查非限制性定语从句。as指代一句话的内容,在句中做动词say的宾语,意为“正如”,句意:正如他们所说,生活在敬老院,老人要比在家里享受到更多的好处。
【5】of communicate – to communicate/ of communicating/ of communication
考查固定结构。短语have chances to do sth/ have chances of doing sth有机会做某事;也可以使用名词communication作为介词of的宾语。
【6】However –Therefore 考查连词。句意:一方面,他们有更多机会相互交流,因为他们有相同的话题和相似的习惯,因此,他们还可以一起做很多事情,不会感到孤单。上下文之间是因果关系,所以使用副词therefore引导上下文。
【7】alone – lonely 考查形容词。形容词lonely孤单的;alone独自;很多老人在一起做很多他们喜欢的事情,所以他们不会感到孤单。
【8】to live – to living 考查动名词。短语prefer doing sth to doing sth宁愿做某事也不愿意做另外一件事情。其中的to是介词,后面要接动名词做宾语,所以本句中使用动名词living。
【9】ourselves – our 考查所有格。反身代词ourselves在句中做宾语,不能做定语修饰名词。本句中所有格our修饰名词children。句意:因为代沟,我们也许会和我们的孩子吵架。
【10】the old people – old people 考查固定用法。老年人有两种方法表示:the old或old people,所以原文中的定冠词the是多余的。