假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

例如：

It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was completely free then,

The am

so I will ﹨ to say “Yes”, I will arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 pm in Friday evening.

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In December of 2006, I was the single parent raising my daughter whom was six years old at the time. I didn’t have much money, and I wanted to buy a Christmas tree. I took my daughter along with me. As we were choosing a Christmas tree within my budget, my daughter wanted a tall tree than that planned one. I told my daughter we can’t afford a taller tree. Someone must have heard of our conversation. When I went to paying for the tree, the clerk said the customer before me had paid for my tree. I shocked. I was very thankful to what the stranger had done for us. That day I promised to me that I would pay it forward.

【答案】

【1】the—a

【2】whom —who

【3】and—but

【4】tall—taller

【5】can’t—couldn’t

【6】去掉heard后面的of

【7】paying—pay

【8】shocked前面加was

【9】to—for

【10】me—myself。

【解析】

试题分析： 通过本文的阅读和改错，考查学生的固定搭配和动词时态和语态、非谓语动词的用法、定语从句、连词、形容词比较等级、冠词的用法等。

【1】the—a 句意：当时我是一个带着六岁女儿的单亲。此处用a表一个身份。

【2】whom —who 句意：我是一个单亲的抚养着一个当时只有6岁的女儿。whom was six years old at the time.一应该是定语从句，修饰先行词my daughter，先行词在本从句中做主语应该用关系代词who，whom做宾语。

【3】and—but 句意：虽然我没有多少钱，当时我还是想买一个圣诞树。前后表转折关系，所以用but。

【4】tall—taller 根据下一句I told my daughter we can’t afford a taller tree.可知，这里的意思是：女儿想要一个比我计划更高的树，所以用比较级taller。

【5】can’t—couldn’t told后面是宾语从句，时态应该也用过去式和主语一致，所以用couldn’t。

【6】去掉heard后面的of hear听到，后面可以跟宾语从句，hear of 的意思是：听说。这里的意思是：一定是有人听到我们母女的谈话了。

【7】paying—pay go to后面用动词原形表目的。

【8】shocked前面加was 本句句意：我很吃惊 。shocked是形容词前面要加系动词was构成系表结构。

【9】to—for be thankful for 的意思是：因为…而感谢。这里感谢是因为一个陌生人为我们的付出。

【10】me—myself 句意：我对自己承诺：我要把这份付出传下去。用反身代词做宾语。