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语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2．只允许修改1 0处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I was excited when I hear that our community was to have its own McDonald’s restaurant. I thought about all those young people whom would not have to go to the next town to buy its favorite burgers and chips. McDonald’s cares about health eating too and works with scientists to provide food that is high quality, safe and healthy. They often provide salads as good as burgers and chops. You can also choose between cola with milk shakes. Of course it also means more work for our area that need jobs badly. McDonald’s says they are interested in doing what is right for the community and being good neighbor. So I think they will be concerned about provide parking for the cars in our main street.

【答案】

【1】hear--heard

【2】whom—who/that

【3】its--their

【4】health--healthy

【5】is后面加of

【6】good--well

【7】with--and

【8】need--needs

【9】being后面加a

【10】provide--providing

【解析】

【1】hear—heard 考查动词的时态。根据I was excited可知用一般过去时；

【2】whom—who/that 考查定语从句； 先行词all those young people，定语从句____ would not have to go to the next town to buy its favorite burgers and chips缺少主语，故用who/that.

【3】its—their 考查代词。句意：我想到许多年轻人，他们没有必要去另外一个小镇去买他们喜欢的汉堡和薯条。

【4】health—healthy 考查形容词。Healthy eating健康饮食；

【5】is后面加of 考查固定结构。Be of high quality高质量；

【6】good--well 考查副词。Well用来修饰provide；

【7】with--and 考查连词。Between 。。and..。。与。。之间；

【8】need--needs 考查动词的时态。先行词是work，不可数名词，定语从句的谓语动词用第三人称单数；

【9】being后面加a 考查冠词。句意：麦当劳说他们对社区做正确的事情感兴趣，会成为一个好的邻居；

【10】provide—providing 考查非谓语动词 。be concerned about对。。关心，about是介词，后面加动名词。