【题目】如何衡量一个人真正的品质,不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语,结合图片所提示的信息,按要求用英语写一篇短文。
“The measure of a man’s real character is what he would do if he knew he would never be found out.”
— Thomas Macaulay

内容要求:
1.你对该引语的理解;2.举例说明;3.恰当的结尾。
注意:
1.内容至少包括一幅图片信息;
2.文中不得出现考生的具体信息;
3.词数:120左右;短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:self-discipline n.自律;self-disciplined adj.自律的
This quotation from Thomas Macaulay tells us that
在线课程【答案】
This quotation from Thomas Macaulay tells us that it is self-discipline that reflects a man’s real character. Therefore, we should be self-disciplined anytime even if we know that our behavior will never be found out.
For example, when taking exams, we should be self-disciplined enough and not cheat. For another, it is essential for us to learn to control ourselves well on the Internet. We can’t be addicted to computer games or bad information, nor can we use the Internet to attack others immorally and illegally. In addition, through self-discipline we should avoid and resist different kinds of temptations, which is of great help to prevent corruptions.
In conclusion, being self-disciplined not only helps us improve ourselves, but contributes to building up a harmonious and civilized society. As the saying goes, the day has eyes and the night has ears. We should make a reasonable choice about what to do wherever and whenever we are.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于议论文,本篇书面表达属于议论文,根据提示信息和要求来写作。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、要依据提示信息或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。行文时注意要明确表达自己的观点和看法。在描述现象和举例子时要有层次感,不能给人留下杂乱无章的感觉。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如Therefore, we should be self-disciplined anytime even if we know that our behavior will never be found out.是让步状语从句;In addition, through self-discipline we should avoid and resist different kinds of temptations, which is of great help to prevent corruptions. 是非限制性定语从句,还有宾语从句We should make a reasonable choice about what to do wherever and whenever we are.等此外,文章还使用了大量短语For another, it is essential for sb to, be addicted to, In addition,is of great help,build up,As the saying goes,make a reasonable choice about等。插入语For another ,In addition ,In conclusion等的使用使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯。