【题目】假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Jack寒假要来中国学中文,请你帮忙找一所汉语学校,你碰巧看到了下面的海报,请你给Jack回信,介绍课程的相关情况。

Course: Chinese for beginners
Time: January 15th –February 15th
Place: Shijiazhuang Language School
Tuition: RMB ¥3,000
For further information: www.SJZLS.org
注意:1. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数:100左右;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m delighted to learn that you are coming to China.
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Yours, Li Hua
在线课程【答案】
Dear Jack,
I’m delighted to know that you are coming to China to learn Chinese. I happened to see a poster the other day. It’s about a Chinese course provided by Shijiazhuang Language School, which you might be interested in.
Shijiazhuang Language School, which is a famous language school and has a reputation for quality teaching, has a course for beginners like you. The learning period is one month, from January 15th to February 15th and the tuition is RMB 3,000, which, as far as I am concerned is quite reasonable. I recommend that you get on their website www. SJZLS.org for detailed information and see if you will like it.
I am ready to offer any help if necessary and I am looking forward to seeing you in China.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本片书面表达属于说明文,根据提示信息和海报说明来介绍汉语学校的概况。所做时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示弄清楚提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,在提纲的范围内进行分析,构思和想法,要以具体的要点来写。本文按照海报上给出的点分别罗列来介绍汉语学校的概况。3、根据要求表达内容并确定句子的时态和语态,就本文而言应该用一般现在时。4、注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,内容详细。多处使用从句以及固定搭配。比如which you might be interested in为 which引导的宾语从句,Shijiazhuang Language School, which is a famous language school为非限制性定语从句。此外,文章还运用了大量短语,as far as I am concerned,happened to,looking forward to,be interested in等等,为文章增添了色彩。