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有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Jim is a Australian boy who has been lived in our city for over two years. I still remember the morning when he came into our class, wear a cap and a pair of sunglasses. He waved to us with grace and introduce himself with a sweet smile, which made us to feel pleased. We gave him a warm welcome. And immediate Jim became our great friend.

Now Jim and we play together, chat with each other and gather picnics. Also, we ride bikes in the country or enjoy hike in the mountains. Sometimes we play ball game on the playground. Jim likes it here and often says it is like being at home. But that is what we wish.

【答案】

【1】a→an

【2】lived→living或去掉been

【3】wear→wearing

【4】introduce→introduced

【5】feel前to去掉

【6】immediate→immediately

【7】picnics前加for

【8】hike→hiking

【9】game→games

【10】But→And

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲述了Jim转学来我们班的情景，后来和我们一起玩成了好朋友并且很喜欢这里的故事。

【1】a→an考查冠词。冠词后是Australian，开头是元音音标，表示“一”要用an，故a→an.

【2】lived→living或去掉been考查时态。句中有for over two years，此句应用现在完成时，结构为：have/has+过去分词，把been去掉；或用现在完成进行时，表示一直在这住，结构为：have/has+been+过去分词；故lived→living或去掉been.

【3】wear→wearing考查非谓语动词。在此做伴随状语，句中主语是he，wear的主语也是he,用-ing形式，故wear→wearing.

【4】introduce→introduced考查时态。此处介绍Jim转学来当天的情况，用的是过去式，句中有and，introduced和waved并列，故introduce→introduced.

【5】feel前to去掉 考查动词用法。make后加省去to的不定式，此处应为which made us feel pleased.“让我们感到高兴”，故把feel前to去掉.

【6】immediate→immediately考查副词。此处是副词immediately修饰整个句子，故immediate→immediately.

【7】picnics前加for

【8】hike→hiking考查动词用法。动词enjoy后用-ing形式，此处用hiking，故hike→hiking.

【9】game→games考查名词。game是可数名词，此处应用复数形式，指球类游戏。故game→games.

【10】But→And考查连词。上句说：他喜欢这里觉得像在家一样。下句是：那也是我们所希望的。之间不是转折关系，是并列关系。故But→And.