【题目】假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom发来电子邮件询问你的音乐喜好和你在新年晚会上的表现。请你给他写封电子邮件，回答他的所有问题。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信的抬头与结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
Hi, Tom，
As you know, I’m music mad.
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By the way, do you love music as well?
在线课程【答案】
Hi, Tom
As you know, I’m music mad. Of all kinds of music, pop is my favorite. I am crazy about it. I think its lyrics are really catchy and meaningful and I can learn to sing easily. Pop makes my life delightful and alive. I can’t stand rock music. It’s too loud and noisy. Although I don’t have enough spare time to enjoy music, I often listen to it on MP3 on my way to school. At home if I don’t study, the music will be on all the time.
At the New Year Party, I played the violin in the school orchestra. I think we played pretty well. The audience gave us a big clap.
By the way, do you love music as well?
【解析】
试题分析：题目要求根据所给要点写一篇邮件，记述记述自己的爱好等。写作要求包括：回答上述邮件中的问题，词数在100词左右，注意开头和结尾不计入总词数；不能出现真实姓名，注意时态的正确使用；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。
亮点说明：范文使用了一些重要的短语：Of all kinds of be crazy about 等使用得当，叙事清晰；
范文注意使用了现在完成时、一般现在时、一般过去时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情，对时态有较好的把握；范文注意使用频度副词often等来表示强调，使表达更加生动；
范文使用了很多形容词 delightful alive catchy meaningful 等使作文更有条理，做到了行文连贯。