【题目】叶诗文，1996年3月1日出生于浙江省杭州市，2010年以来在各重大游泳赛事中表现优异，成为中国泳坛首位“大满贯（grand slam）”得主，成为新一代的中国游泳领军人物。“叶诗文是怎样炼成的”？近期某网站就此现象对网民做了一次调查，结果见下表。请根据下面表格的文字内容写一篇120字左右的短文，短文内容须包括表中提供的所有信息。
成功的关键 | 1. 聪明有天赋：爱动脑筋，纠正错误及时； |
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2. 挚爱且自律：认真从不缺席训练，保质保量完成训练任务； | ||
3. 要强不服输：心理素质好，从容面对失败不放弃. | ||
你能向她学点什么？（不少于两点） | ||
Born in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province on Match 1st, 1996，Ye Shiwen, has been performing amazingly in different important swimming matches, being China’s first grand slam swimming champion. Her great success has aroused national concern. on the Internet.
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在线课程【答案】
There are many factors contributing to her extraordinary achievements. To begin with, Ye Shiwen has a gife for swimming and is ready to think over her techniques, making it possible that she can correct her mistakes during the process of practice timely. Additionally, Ye has been interested in swimming since a child, as a result, she takes every practice seriously and complete it with quality and quantity guaranteed , never being absent. Moreover, Ye has such good psychological quality that she can cope with every detail well, especially when faced with failure.
Personally, she has set a good example to us students and we can learn a lot from her. Not only her perseverance and persistence but also her diligence and optimism are all what we can benefit from.
【解析】试题分析：本文为记叙文类书面表达，提供中文信息材料。文章主要是关于人物方面的描述。写作之前要认真审题，要确保写作内容的完整尤其是一开始的信息材料。接着对于表格里的信息要适当展开处理，采用一定的句型句式。最后发表个人观点需要对前面的内容加以总结，整篇文章对学生的语言表达有一定的能力要求。