【题目】英国伦敦一中学组织部分学生在寒假期间对足球起源地——临淄进行参观、游览,他们需要一名中学生英语导游。假如你是李华,请写一封自荐信,自荐理由包括以下三个方面:
(1)英语口语流畅,曾做过博物馆的志愿解说员。
(2)性格优势:热情、开朗,擅长与人沟通……
(3)了解临淄本地文化。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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在线课程【答案】DearSir/Madam,
Having heard that you need a middle school student to act as the tour guide, I feel I am qualified for the job. So I am writing to apply for it.
I can speak fluent English and have ever been a volunteer commentator in museum. Moreover I am enthusiastic and outgoing. Most of all I am good at communicating with people. On top of that I have a great master of the local culture of LinZi. I’m interested in the work. I want very much to be accepted by your school. I’ll work hard if I can get the opportunity.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Lihua
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语写一封自荐信,表明希望成为中学生英语导游的意愿。
第一步:审题
体裁:提纲类作文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
要求:用英语写一封自荐信,表明希望中学生英语导游的意愿。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
hear;act as;guide;qualified;fluent;volunteer;commentator;Moreover;enthusiastic;outgoing;On top of that
第三步:连词成句
1. Having heard that you need a middle school student to act as the tour guide, I feel I am qualified for it.
2. So I am writing to apply for it.
3. I can speak fluent English and have ever been a volunteer commentator in museum.
4. Moreover I am enthusiastic and outgoing.
5. Most of all I am good at communicating with people.
6. On top of that I have a great master of the local culture of LinZi.
7. I’m interested in the work.
8. I want very much to be accepted by your school.
9. I’ll work hard if I can get the opportunity.
10. I am looking forward to your reply.
第四步:连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改