【题目】假定你是李华,因为疫情,你们学校延迟开学并采用网上授课的方法进行教学。你的英国朋友Oliver担心你并且想知道你这一阶段的学习。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.介绍上课方式和学习情况。2.你对此的感受。
参考词汇:novel coronavirus
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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在线课程【答案】Dear Oliver,
Thanks for your concern. Everything is ok with me. I’m writing to share my current study life with you.
As you know, novel coronavirus prevents us starting school as scheduled. To avoid being infected, we spend most of the time at home. Thanks to the advanced technology, we can have classes on the Internet every day. Our teachers make full use of an app named Dingding to give classes, where we can not only watch the live video, but interact with each other. We all think highly of this learning way and are confident of the coming GaoKao.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达是一封书信。假定你是李华,因为疫情,你们学校延迟开学并采用网上授课的方法进行教学。你的英国朋友Oliver担心你并且想知道你这一阶段的学习。请你给他写封邮件介绍相关情况。
这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,不能遗漏要点:1.介绍上课方式和学习情况;2.你对此的感受。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有:Thanks for your concern. Everything is Ok with me. share my current study life with you,as you know,prevents us starting school,as scheduled,To avoid being infected, we spend most of the time at home. Thanks to the advanced technology, we can have classes on the Internet every day. make full use of,watch the live video,interact with each other,think highly of,be confident of,Looking forward to your reply. 可以使用的衔接词:1.表文章结构顺序:First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second… And then,Finally,In the end,At last,Above all。2.表并列补充关系:What is more,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,In addition,as well as,not only…but (also)。通过词汇铺垫,我们就很容易地行文了,文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。