【题目】假定你是学校学生会主席李华。你们计划举办一个“中国年”聚会,欢迎来学校访问的澳大利亚学生。请你给领队Mr. Smith写一封邀请邮件,内容包括:
1. 发出邀请;
2. 聚会的时间和地点;
3. 简要介绍活动内容。
注意:1. 词数80左右;开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
Welcome to our school and I have some good news to tell you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
在线课程【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
Welcome to our school and I have some good news to tell you. In order to spend a happy new year with you, we are planning to hold an activity called 'Chinese New Year' next Sunday in the school hall. We sincerely hope that you can come and join us.
To start with, we will have a performance, which includes some Chinese elements, such as Beijing opera, ethnical costume show and cross talk. Then, we will have a part of cultural exchange, during which we will teach you how to make jiaozi, a symbolic food of Chinese New Year, and you can tell or teach us the tradition and traditional things of your country. If you have some advice or questions please contact with me.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给澳大利亚学生领队Mr. Smith写信,邀请他们来参加“中国年”的聚会活动。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1. 发出邀请;
2. 聚会的时间和地点;
3. 简要介绍活动内容。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
invite sb. to/ share sth. with sb./ join sb./ teach sb. to do sth./ tell sb. sth./ have a better understanding of/ spend time with sb.
第三步:连词成句
1. In order to spend a happy new year with you, we are planning to hold an activity called 'Chinese New Year' next Sunday in the school hall.
2. We sincerely invite you to come and have fun with us.
3. We will have a performance, which includes some Chinese elements, ranging from Beijing opera, to ethnical costume show.
4. We will teach you how to make jiaozi, a symbolic food of Chinese New Year.
5. You can share us the traditions of your country, such as food or celebration.
6. If you have some advice or questions please contact with me.
7. Looking forward to your coming.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/ but/ or/ so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)