【题目】假设你叫李华，你校的外籍教师Mr. Brown上周末踢足球时摔伤并住院了。请你代表全班同学，用英文给他写封邮件，要点包括：
1. 询问他的伤情，并打算去看望他；
2. 告诉他不要担心你们的学习；
3. 祝他早日康复。
注意：1. 词数：100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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在线课程【答案】Dear Mr. Brown,
It was such a shock to hear that you were badly injured while playing football last weekend. Are you feeling any better now?
Concerned about your present situation, I’m going to see you on behalf of the whole class on this Tuesday afternoon. What a pity that you can’t teach us for a few days! Nevertheless, there is no need to worry about our study since we’ll spare no efforts to make up for the lost lessons. Last but not least, if there is anything we can offer to help, please don’t hesitate to contact us.
I do expect your quick recovery. Best wishes！
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向外籍教师Mr. Brown慰问并表达祝愿。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
人称：以第一、二人称为主
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分总法
要点：
1. 询问他的伤情，并打算去看望他；
2. 告诉他不要担心你们的学习；
3. 祝他早日康复。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
badly injured；play football；last weekend；feel well；be concerned about；on behalf of；a few；there is no need to do；worry about；spare no efforts to do；make up for；offer to help；hesitate to do等
第三步：连词成句
1. It was such a shock to hear that you were badly injured while playing football last weekend.
2. Concerned about your present situation, I’m going to see you on behalf of the whole class on this Tuesday afternoon.
3. What a pity that you can’t teach us for a few days!
4. There is no need to worry about our study since we’ll spare no efforts to make up for the lost lessons.
5. If there is anything we can offer to help, please don’t hesitate to contact us.
6. I do expect your quick recovery.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
Nevertheless；Last but not least；if；while等
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改