【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、答案请写在答题卷上；
2、只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分；
3、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
4、答题符号、格式要规范：
One June, I helped my grandma water the freshly planted flowers around the house. She was so gentle with them no wonder they grew so fast. When all the work were finished, I ran to get my bike to ride for a while. As I was getting on it, however, I noticed there was anything new. I got off and kneel down on the walkway leading to our house. I found a single wild flower coming out of a crack by the walkway, without the water, soil or love.
The surprised new life hit me a lot. Sometimes in my own life, I felt my grow looked like grandma’s flowers, that were loved and cared for. At other times I felt as if I were that wild flower, growing by the walkway quiet and having to grow through the solid concrete. I realized that it doesn’t matter where you grow and it just matters that you grow.
在线课程【答案】1. no前加that
2. were→was
3. anything→something
4. kneel→knelt/kneeled
5. 去掉the
6. surprised→surprising
7. grow→growth
8. that→which
9. quiet→quietly
10. and→but
【解析】
本文是一篇记叙文。作者通过对奶奶细心养的花和顽强生长的野花的对比，联系到自己的生长，意识到重要的不是生长在哪里而是你的成长。
1. 考查连词。句意：她对它们如此温柔，难怪他们长得这么快。so...that...如此……以至于……是固定句型，故no前加that。
2. 考查主谓一致。句意：当所有的工作都完成，我跑去骑了一会儿自行车。Work“工作”是不可数名词，谓语动词用单数，故将were改为was。
3. 考查代词。anything主要用于否定句和疑问句，something主要用于肯定句中，本句表示有一些新的东西，故将anything改为something。
4. 考查动词时态。and连接并列谓语，根据语境用一般过去时，故将kneel改为knelt/kneeled。
5. 考查冠词。句意：我发现一朵野花从人行道上的裂缝里出来，没有水、土壤或爱。此处water表示泛指，故去掉water前the。
6. 考查ing形式形容词。修饰物用ing形容词修饰，表示事物的特征；ed形式形容词修饰人，表示人的感受，此处表示“这个令人吃惊的新生命”。故将surprised改为surprising。
7. 考查名词。形容词性物主代词修饰名词，grow是动词，名词形式是growth，故将grow改为growth。
8. 考查定语从句的关系词。此处引导非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词flowers，从句中作主语，引导非限制性定语从句用关系代词which，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，故将that改为which。
9. 考查副词。修饰动词growing用副词作状语，故将quiet改为quietly。
10. 考查连词。句意：我意识到你在哪里成长并不重要，重要的是你在成长。前后文是转折关系，故将and改为but。