【题目】阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was time to go home. “Remember to work on your class speeches for homework,” Miss Walker called, as everyone started talking and packing their school bags. Jenny felt sick. She hated reading aloud in class. She was sure everyone got really bored listening to her. Once, when Jenny was reading out her holiday diary. Lee was even looking at his watch, a silver and blue one which seemed just magical.
Jenny watched Lee walk ahead of her as they left school. He seemed so clever and he had a certain sort of shining confidence. He was just one of those people who were good at everything. Jenny sighed. As she turned the comer, she saw Lee’s watch lying right in the middle of the path.
Jenny knew she should just pick it up and return it to Lee, but she didn't want to run after him. Jenny bent down quickly, picked up the watch and ran home. On arriving home, Jenny put it on almost without thinking. She was surprised that it fitted her so well. She walked to the mirror and started practising her speech. “I’m going to talk about swimming. I have been lucky. I've won lots of competitions. But when I’m in a race, I’m not really thinking about winning. I’m just loving the feeling of being in the water…” Jenny laughed with excitement. She walked across the room. She suddenly seemed to have a certain sort of confidence. Turning back to the mirror, Jenny saw a flash of light from the watch in the glass. The flashes of silver seemed almost magical. So maybe Lee’s watch really did have something magic.
The next day, as the lesson began, Miss Walker asked who was going to be brave and go first. Nobody moved. Jenny slowly raised her hand. Before Miss Walker could say something, there was a shout from behind. “She’s stolen my watch!” Lee said angrily. “It went missing at school yesterday. ”
注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150词左右;
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation.
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At that moment, Miss Walker smiled and asked the students to listen to Jenny’s speech first.
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在线课程【答案】Paragraph 1:
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation. Jenny didn't answer. How could she explain about the watch and its magic? No one could understand. No one could believe. “But I saw you wearing it yesterday,” Miss Walker gently reminded him. For a moment Lee remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that. Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech. Everybody was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless.
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At that moment, Miss Walker smiled and asked the students to listen to Jenny's speech first. Jenny walked slowly to the front. She couldn't think properly. All round her, a sea of faces was watching. She felt so frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walker's encouraging eyes. Jenny took a deep breath. “I'm going to talk about swimming…” Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny's wonderful speech. Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence.
【解析】
这是一篇读后续写。
通过阅读所给文章可知,Jenny捡到了Lee的手表,把手表拿回了家,Jenny非常喜欢这块手表。第二天Walker小姐在课堂上请学生回答问题时,Jenny举起了手,而Lee看到了Jenny手上的手表,于是举手说Jenny偷了自己的手表。
续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:每个人都盯着Jenny,等待她的解释。后文应当描写Jenny对此的回应,Walker小姐帮Jenny解了围,Jenny说她在回家的路上发现了它,并决定演讲结束后把它归还。每个人都很困惑,问为什么。Jenny再次无言以对。第二段开头是:这时,Walker小姐笑了,她让学生们先听Jenny的演讲。后文应当描写Jenny的演讲,以及学生们对此的反应。大家为Jenny精彩的演讲鼓掌,Jenny也终于意识到自信的真正来源。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度,我们要熟悉所给划线词语,恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右;续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。