【题目】假如你是李华,在过去一周你在英国参加中学生文化交流活动,期间一直住在你的英国好友Peter家,现在已经回国。请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。
要点包括:
1. 表达感激之情;
2. 回忆各种收获;
3. 邀请他有空时来中国玩。
注意:词数100左右;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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在线课程【答案】Dear Peter,
I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.
Guided by you, I had a chance to visit some places of interest in England and experience such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery. Thanks to your generous help, I do believe that I have a better understanding of your country and culture. What’s more, during the week, the comfortable room, delicious meals and especially your friendly family made me feel at home.
I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness. I will show you around in China. I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封信。
第1步:根据提示可知,假如你是李华,在过去一周你在英国参加中学生文化交流活动,期间一直住在你的英国好友Peter家,现在已经回国。请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。要点包括:1.表达感激之情;2.回忆各种收获;3.邀请他有空时来中国玩。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):convey (表达);have a chance to (有机会);unique culture(独特的文化);as well as (而且)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。