【题目】假定你是李华, 你校将举办中国风光摄影比赛, 中外学生均可参加。请给你的新西兰朋友Daniel写封电子邮件邀请他参赛, 内容包括:
1. 发邮件的目的;
2. 投稿截止时间;
3. 参赛作品发送至邮箱:photoshow@zhschool。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇:中国风光摄影Chinese landscape photography
Dear Daniel,
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Yours,
Li Hua
在线课程【答案】Dear Daniel,
Our school is going to hold a Chinese Landscape Photography Competition next month.I am writing to invite you to take part in the competition.The theme of the competition is Chinese landscape.Any student,international students included,who is interested in landscape photography is welcome to participate.Since you have taken a lot of wonderful landscape photographs when travelling in China,it will be a golden chance to show your pictures to us.
The deadline for submitting your artworks is January,18.If you are interested,please send your works to photoshozc@zhschoo1.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友Daniel写信,邀请他来参加中国风光摄影比赛。
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主
结构:分总
要求:
1. 发邮件的目的;
2. 投稿截止时间;
3. 参赛作品发送至邮箱:photoshow@zhschool。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
invite sb. to do sth./ tell sb. sth./ take part in/ deadline/ be interested in/ take photos/ send…to…/ attach…to…
第三步:连词成句
Our school is going to hold an activity named Chinese Landscape Photography Competition next month.
I am writing to invite you to take part in the competition.
The theme of the competition is Chinese landscape.
All the students,including international students,who are interested in landscape photography, can take part in it.
Knowing you have taken a lot of wonderful landscape photographs when travelling in China,I think it will be a golden chance to show your pictures to us.
The deadline is January,18.
If you are interested, please send your works to photoshozc@zhschoo1.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)