【题目】假设你是李华,作为交换生(an exchange student)正在英国 windmill College 学习。今天早晨你骑车上学时不小心刮擦到了一辆停在路边的汽车。由于急着上学,你无法在原地等候车主。请留一张便条,内容包括:
1. 表明身份;2.简述事情经过;3.道歉并表示愿意赔偿;
4. 联系方式(Tel:5893671 E-mail: lihua@windmillco.org)。
1. 表达歉意 2. 解释原因 3. 另约时间
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在线课程【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua, an exchange student from China studying at Windmill College. I'm truly sorry that my bike scratched your car when I was riding to school this morning. I understand it will certainly put you in a very bad mood. I sincerely apologize for what I did and promise I will cover all the relevant costs. As school will start soon, I can't wait on the scene for you. Please contact me at 589367 or lihua@ windmillco.org. Many apologies again for all the inconvenience that I have caused.
Best regards!
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生因为不小心擦坏了停在路边的一辆车给车主写一封道歉信。
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般过去时和一般现在时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1. 表明身份
2. 简述事情经过
3. 道歉并表示愿意赔偿
4. 联系方式
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
exchange student / scratch/ apologize to sb. for sth./ make a promise/ relevant/ can’t wait to do sth./ contact
第三步:连词成句
1. I'm Li Hua, an exchange student from China studying at Windmill College.
2. I'm truly sorry that my bike scratched your car when I was riding to school this morning.
3. I am aware that it will certainly put you in a very bad mood.
4. I sincerely apologize for what I did and promise I will cover all the relevant costs.
5. Since school will start soon, I can't wait for you on the scene.
6. Please contact me at 589367 or lihua@ windmillco.org.
7. Many apologies again for all the inconvenience that I have caused.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)