【题目】假定英语课上要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中并有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划拟。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The day when we returned to school was impressive. Because the COVID-19 outbreak, we had to stay home during the three months’ “vacation”. I was touching when I stepped into the school, where remained clean and neat. The staff must have worked hard to keep everything tidy and safe but we could study in a comfortable environment. There were sign telling us to wash hands frequently and wearing masks. Mr. Chen, our headteacher, greeted us warm in the classroom. A mask was covered most of his face, but his eyes were shining. He said we had done his part to stop the disease spreading. What a unforgettable day!
在线课程【答案】1.Because后添加of
2.touching→touched
3.where→which
4.but→so
5.sign→signs
6.wearing→wear
7.warm→warmly
8.删除was
9.his→our
10.a→an
【解析】
这是一篇记叙文。文章主要记叙了由于新冠肺炎疫情爆发,这三个月的“假期”人们不得不呆在家里,作者回到学校后,被依然干净整洁的校园感动的事情。
1.考查介词。because 意为“因为”,引导原因状语从句,because of 为固定搭配,意为“因为”。后面接名词,此处后面是名词短语the COVID-19 outbreak应用because of。故Because后添加of。
2.考查动词语态。主语 I 与动词 touch 之间为逻辑上的被动关系,故此处应该使用被动语态。故touching改为touched。
3.考查定语从句。句意:当我走进学校时,我被感动了,学校依然干净整洁。此处为非限制性定语从句修饰先行词school,且先行词在从句中作主语。where 是表示地点的副词,不能用作主语。此处需要用关系代词which。故where改为which。
4.考查连词。句意:工作人员一定很努力地保持一切的整洁和安全,所以我们可以在一个舒适的环境中学习。分析上下文语境可知是因果关系,应用连词so。故but改为so。
5.考查名词的数。sign为可数名词,根据上文were可知应用其复数形式 signs。故sign改为signs。
6.考查非谓语动词。句意:有指示牌告诉我们要勤洗手,戴口罩。结合句意表示“告诉某人做某事”短语为tell sb. to do sth.,and 前后应当为并列成分,因此形式应当保持一致,故此处 wearing 也应当使用原型 wear。故wearing改为wear。
7.考查副词。此处修饰动词 greeted应用副词warmly。故warm改为warmly。
8.考查动词语态。主语 mask 与动词 cover 之间为逻辑上的主动关系,故此处不应该使用被动语态。故删除was。
9.考查代词。句意:他说我们已经尽了自己的力量来阻止疾病的蔓延。分析句子可知此处应当是指“我们”已经尽了自己的力量应用代词our。故his改为our。
10.考查冠词。day为可数名词,此处为泛指应用不定冠词,且unforgettable 是以元音音素开头的单词,因此不定冠词应当使用 an。故a改为an。