【题目】假定你是李华,你校将举办太极拳(Tai Chi)比赛。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友James参加,内容包括:
1. 比赛时间;
2. 活动安排;
3. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当添加细节,以使行文连贯。
在线课程【答案】Dear James,
How is everything going? Learning that you are interested in Chinese Kongfu, I am writing to invite you to enjoy a Tai Chi competition organized by our school.
The competition, scheduled to be held at the stadium at 9:00 next Saturday, is a must-see for any enthusiast of Chinese Kongfu. As planned, there will be an opening ceremony when a short video about the history and development of Tai Chi will be introduced. Later on, the exciting competition will be conducted, when we can watch the Tai Chi players fighting with each other. As far as I know, the members of the Tai Chi club in our school will be part of the competition. I cannot wait to enjoy it.
Should you be available, I strongly suggest you come to learn more about Tai Chi and enjoy the competition. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文书面表达为应用文,要求李华写邮件邀请James参加太极比赛。
第一步:审题
1.体裁:邀请涵
2.人称:第一人称
3.时态:一般将来时,一般现在时
4.要点:
①写作背景和写作目的
②比赛时间,活动安排
③表示期待
第二步:列要点 写提纲
Para. 1 be interested in...; invite sb to do sth;
Para. 2 be scheduled to be held …; a must; will be introduced; conduct a competition; watch sb doing sth; can’t wait to do sth
Para. 3 be available; learn more about sth
第三步:连词成句
1. You are interested in Chinese Kongfu.
2. I am writing to invite you to enjoy a Tai Chi competition organized by our school.
3. The competition is scheduled to be held at the stadium at 9:00 next Saturday and it is a must-see for any enthusiast of Chinese Kongfu.
4. There will be an opening ceremony when a short video about the history and development of Tai Chi will be introduced.
5. The exciting competition will be conducted, and we can watch the Tai Chi players fighting with each other.
6. The members of the Tai Chi club in our school will be part of the competition.
7. I suggest you come to learn more about Tai Chi and enjoy the competition.
第四步:润色提高
1.添加交际表达
开头添加寒暄用语:How is everything going?
结尾添加期待回复:Looking forward to your reply.
2.增加句子之间的连贯性
As planned, there will be an opening ceremony when a short video about the history and development of Tai Chi will be introduced.
Later on, the exciting competition will be conducted, when we can watch the Tai Chi players fighting with each other.
As far as I know, the members of the Tai Chi club in our school will be part of the competition. I cannot wait to enjoy it.
3. 使用高级表达
Learning that you are interested in Chinese Kongfu, I am writing to invite you to enjoy a Tai Chi competition organized by our school.
The competition, scheduled to be held at the stadium at 9:00 next Saturday, is a must-see for any enthusiast of Chinese Kongfu.
Should you be available, I strongly suggest you come to learn more about Tai Chi and enjoy the competition.
第五步:漂亮书写