【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。母亲节要来了, 你的美国好友Jim想知道你准备如何庆祝母亲节,请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.庆祝方法;
2.询问Jim如何庆祝母亲节。
注意:1.词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
在线课程【答案】Dear Jim,
How is everything going? I’m glad to receive your e-mail in which you asked me how I will spend Mother’s Day. Now I’m writing to tell you about my plan.
I am planning to give my mom a big surprise on that day. I bought a cook book last week so that I can learn how to cook the dishes my mom loves. I have been working on it for a couple of days and I hope when the day comes, I am well prepared!
I am very nervous because this will be the first time I cook for my mom. What do you think of the plan and what surprise are you going to present to your mom?
Write to me soon! I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。母亲节要来了, 你的美国好友Jim想知道你准备如何庆祝母亲节,请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:1.庆祝方法;2.询问Jim如何庆祝母亲节。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):Mother’s Day(母亲节);a big surprise (一个大惊喜);so that(以便);the first time (第一次);think of (考虑)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时、现在进行时、一般将来时、一般过去时和现在完成进行时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。