【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共 有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或 修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写岀该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写岀修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
My uncle, who had been working in a hospital in our city, is great success as a doctor. Last night I went to visit him and told him I was in low spirits because he had failed the maths test again. After hearing that I said, he told me that when he was at school, he wanted to be a doctor. He worked very harder at his lessons and tried to enter to a university. However, something unhappy happened to his family, it forced him to work for a life. But he spent his spare time studying or finally became a doctor. “The secret of success,” he said, “are to never give up whatever difficulty you may meet with in the future.”
在线课程【答案】1. had → has
2.在great前面加a
3. he → I
4. that →what
5. harder → hard
6.去掉to
7. it → which
8. life → living
9. or → and
10. are → is
【解析】
这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了，作者因数学考试不及格去找当医生的叔叔开解，叔叔用自己的学习经历激励作者不要灰心。
1. 考查时态。此处指“我叔叔一直在我市的一家医院工作”，过去发生延续到现在还要持续下去的动作，用现在完成进行时（has/have been doing），主语My uncle是单数。故将had改为has。
2. 考查冠词。此处指“我叔叔当医生是一件非常成功的事”，success指“成功”时，不可数名词，指“一件成功的事或人”时，是可数名词，在本句中success指“一件成功的事”，是可数名词，表泛指，great不以元音音素开头，要加不定冠词a。故在great前面加a。
3. 考查代词。此处指“因为我数学考试又不及格”，应用代词I。故将he改为I。
4. 考查宾语从句引导词。hear后接一个宾语从句，从句缺乏宾语，表“……的事物、什么”，应用连接代词what。故将that改为what。
5. 考查副词。此处指“他很努力地学习功课，想考上大学”，本句并无比较的含义，无需用比较级，应用副词原级。故将harder改为 hard。
6. 考查及物动词。enter是及物动词，后面直接加名词，不用介词。故去掉to。
7. 考查非限制性定语从句关系词。本句为非限制性定语从句，先行词是句子something unhappy happened to his family，指物，在从句中作主语，应用关系代词which。故将it改为which。
8. 考查名词。此处指“然而，他的家庭发生了一些不幸的事情，迫使他以工作谋生。”表示“谋生、生计”，应用名词living。故将life改为living。
9. 考查连词。此处指“但他把业余时间花在了学习上，并且最终成为了一名医生。”前后两句表并列顺承，应用并列连词and。故将or改为and。
10. 考查主谓一致。主语The secret of success是单数，主谓一致，谓语也用单数形式。故将are改为is。