【题目】假定你是李华,大学刚毕业。你看见某公司在China Daily上刊登了一则广告,招聘英文秘书一名,要求如下。请你根据其要求,写一封求职信。
1. 20~25周岁,身体健康,身高1.75米以上;
2.本科以上学历,有工作经验者优先;
3.具备扎实的英语基础,擅长写作。
注意: 1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear sir,
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Yours,
Li Hua
在线课程【答案】Dear sir,
Having learned in China Daily that you are looking for a secretary who has a good command of the English language, I’m writing to apply for this position.
My name is Li hua, twenty-two years old. I am 1.78 meters tall, strong and healthy. I’ve just graduated from the English Department of Yunnan University with a bachelor’s degree. In my spare time at university, I worked as a typist for some time. I’m also good at writing in English and two articles of mine have been published in 21st Century so far. And I passed the National English Band 6 last year.
I’m very interested in the job. If I can take the position, I’ll be thankful to you for your kindness.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封求职信,应聘英文秘书。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 20~25周岁,身体健康,身高1.75米以上;
2.本科以上学历,有工作经验者优先;
3.具备扎实的英语基础,擅长写作。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
look for;look forward to;a good command of;graduate from;be good at
第三步:连词成句
Having learned in China Daily that you are looking for a secretary who has a good command of the English language, I’m writing to apply for this position.
I’ve just graduated from the English Department of Yunnan University with a bachelor’s degree.
I’m also good at writing in English and two articles of mine have been published in 21st Century so far.
I’m very interested in the job. If I can take the position, I’ll be thankful to you for your kindness.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second,And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改