【题目】假定你是李华,是伦敦孔子学院的一名助教。按照学院安排,你近期要开设一门线上课 程,介绍中国沙画文化。请你写一封email,邀请你的学生们报名参加。内容包括:
1.课程的安排;2.报名方式;3.希望学生们都参加。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:Confucius Institute孔子学院sand painting 沙画
Dear students,
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Yours,
Li Hua
在线课程【答案】Dear students,
As is scheduled by London Confucius Institute, I will launch an online course named China’s Sand Paintings. So I’m writing to invite you to sign up for it.
The course has been arranged to start from August 1, which will last one month with one lecture for each day from 9:00 am to 10:30 am. Centering on the culture, the course shall introduce in detail the history, the well-known sand painters and the future of sand paintings in China.
If interested, please sign up online at the institute wed before July 20. Hope you all can participate.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邀请邮件,邀请自己的学生报名参加学校举办的介绍中国沙画文化的课程。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.课程的安排;
2.报名方式;
3.希望学生们都参加。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be scheduled by; Confucius Institute;launch; online course; sand painting; invite sb to do; sign up for; arrange for; last; center on; in detail; well-known; be interested; participate.
第三步:连词成句
As is scheduled by London Confucius Institute, I will launch an online course named China’s Sand Paintings.
I’m writing to invite you to sign up for it.
The course has been arranged to start from August 1, which will last one month with one lecture for each day from 9:00 am to 10:30 am.
Centering on the culture, the course shall introduce in detail the history, the well-known sand painters and the future of sand paintings in China.
If interested, please sign up online at the institute wed before July 20.
Hope you all can participate.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改