【题目】假定你是李华,正在美国学习。你打算利用业余时间做份兼职,并在网上看到了一则餐厅招聘服务员的广告,请你写封求职信,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.工作经验;
3. 个人优势。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir / Madam,
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在线课程【答案】Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to apply for the position of waiter at your restaurant, as advertised on the website. For the past two years I have been working part-time at McDonald’s where I have gained wide experience in dealing with people. In addition, I love cooking, so I am very interested in different kinds of food. In view of the fact that I am used to working long hours, I believe I am ideally suited for this job.
If you need further details, please do not hesitate to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和现在完成时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.表达目的
2.展现个人优势
1)在麦当劳做个兼职。(work part-time at McDonald’s)
2)喜欢烹饪。(love cooking)
3) 能吃苦。(work long hours)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
apply for; position; grateful; gained wide experience; am very interested in; in view of; be suited for; hesitate to; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I am writing to apply for the position.
2. I have gained wide experience.
3. I am very interested in different kinds of food.
4. I am ideally suited for this job.
5. please do not hesitate to contact me.
6. I look forward to hearing from you.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second...And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause (从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改