【题目】假定你是李华，暑期在英国旅游时得到当地导游Mr. Smith的悉心照顾,回国后给他写一封邮件表达谢意。
主要内容：1.回忆旅行中美好时光; 2.遇到的困难和帮助；3.邀请他来中国旅游。
注意：1）词数100 左右（开头已给，不计入总词数）；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
在线课程【答案】Dear Smith,
I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your help while I was traveling in England during summer vocation.
It is your detailed and humorous introduction that enables me to have a deeper insight into British culture and have a wonderful time there. I am also deeply impressed by your sincere help to get me some medicine when I caught a cold and your perfect advice in choosing gifts for my family.
Thanks again for all your efforts! I do hope someday you’ll come to China and let me show you around my hometown.
Yours,
Lihua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，表达对朋友的感谢以及邀请来中国旅游。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段表达感谢；第二段描述旅途回忆（介绍文化；遇到困难；提供帮助）；第三段提出邀请，并以此为大纲进行写作。
要求：1.表达感谢(express my heartfelt gratitude)
2. 1)回忆旅行中美好时光; (introduction; British culture; have a wonderful time)
2)遇到的困难和帮助；(caught a cold; advice for choosing gifts)
3.邀请他来中国旅游。(show you around China)
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
express my gratitude; enable sb. to do; have a deeper insight into; have a wonderful time; be deeply impressed by ; show sb. around sp.
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your help while I was traveling in England during summer vocation.
2. It is your detailed and humorous introduction that enables me to have a deeper insight into British culture and have a wonderful time there.
3. I am also deeply impressed by your sincere help to get me some medicine when I caught a cold and your perfect advice in choosing gifts for my family.
4. I do hope someday you’ll come to China and let me show you around my hometown.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改