【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I am traveling around, I watch people a lot in order kill time. The other day, I saw a couple at an airport. They were not worn business clothes, but the man were carrying a suitcase. Every few second, the woman had looked around. I wondered that someone was following them. Suddenly I remembered a story in a newspaper I had read a week before: the bank clerk stole one million pounds and disappeared with his wife. The couple real looked like them. Maybe I should stop them. Just then, I saw them say goodbye to each other, and the woman walk away.
Well, sometimes I make mistakes like that. But I find it very useful for mine writing.
在线课程【答案】kill前加to
worn→wearing
were→was
second→seconds
去掉had
that→if/whether
the→a
real→really
walk→walking
mine→my
【解析】
这是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者旅行时总喜欢去观察别人,当然这期间总会有判断失误的时候,但是作者把他们当成宝贵的写作材料。
1. 考查固定搭配。in order to“为了”表目的。故在kill前加to。
2. 考查非谓语动词。结合语意,他们没有穿正装,主语they和wear之间是主动语态。故将worn改为wearing。
3. 考查主谓一致。分析句子可知,the man 是句子的主语,谓语动词应该是单数。故将were改为was。
4. 考查名词的数。second“秒”,是个可数名词,不能单独使用。故将second改为seconds。
5. 考查时态。结合上下句,作者描述的是过去的事情,所以用过去式,had looked around 是过去完成时,时态不一致。故将had去掉。
6. 考查连词。结合上文,他们的行为有些不自在,所以我在想是否有人在跟踪他们。分析句子可知,这里缺少了“是否”。故将that改为if/weather。
7. 考查冠词。冠词a“一个”,the“这个”;通过语意,作者一周前读了一本书,讲述的是:一个银行职员偷走100万英镑后,和他妻子消失的故事。故将the改为a。
8. 考查副词。副词修饰动词做状语,此处用副词really修饰动词looked like。故将real改为really。
9. 考查谓语动词。分析句子可知,and连接两个并列的谓语动词saw和walk,文章时态是过去时,所以walk需要用过去时。故将walk改为walked。
10. 考查代词。mine是名词性物主代词;my是形容词性物主代词。分析句子,此处应该是my来修饰后面的writing。故将mine改为my。