【题目】假如你是李华。你打算邀请在你校学习的英国交换生Mike周末外出游玩一天。请你根据以下要点给Mike发一封邮件:
1.发出邀请;
2.日程安排及理由;
3.询问对方意见。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike
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Yours,
Li Hua
在线课程【答案】Dear Mike,
I am writing to invite you to go out for a day on weekends. Here is a brief schedule.
Since we are living in the center of the city, we need to set off a little bit earlier, at about 6 am, and return at about 5 pm. Aiming to relax ourselves, several activities are arranged, including fishing, swimming and barbecue. Considering the food safety, we will bring fresh water, foods and snacks along with us. Of course, a bus is booked ahead of time, and what you are required to do is to be at the school gate on time.
If it is convenient for you, I do hope you will come to join us. Do you have any suggestions for this outing?
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,邀请英国交换生Mike周末外出游玩一天。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 发出邀请
2. 日程安排及理由;询问对方意见。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
go out;on weekends;in the center of;set out;Aiming to;along with sb.;of course;ahead of;require to do
第三步:连词成句
1. Here is a brief schedule.
2. Since we are living in the center of the city, we need to set out a little bit earlier, at about 6 am, and return at about 5 pm.
3. Aiming to relax ourselves, several activities are arranged, including fishing, swimming and barbecue.
4. Considering the food safety, we will bring fresh water, foods and snacks along with us.
5. A bus is booked ahead of time, and what you are required to do is to be at the school gate on time.
6. If it is convenient for you, I do hope you will come to join us.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改