【题目】假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Peter本周六即将结束在中国的旅行,乘飞机回英国。你因有事无法按原定计划去机场为他送行。请给Peter写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表达款意;
2.说明不能送行的原因。
注意:1.词数 100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件的格式已给出,不计人总词数。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
在线课程【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m terribly sorry for my not being able to see you off at the airport this Saturday as I have promised.
My English teacher Mrs Li has asked me to help her make some preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend. I have just been informed of this plan, and as the class monitor, I just feel responsible and I have to do this job. So I am afraid I can’t be present at the airport.
How I wish I could have the chance to talk with you once more about the happy days we spent together before you go away. Wish you a safe journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生因有事无法去机场为朋友Peter送行写封邮件,告知他不能送行的原因。
第一步:审题。
体裁:邮件应用文
时态:根据提示,时态为一般现在时和现在完成时为主。
要点:1 对无法去机场送行道歉
2 不能送行的具体原因
3 表达自己的祝福
结构布局:
第一段,告知朋友Peter无法按原计划去机场给他送行,并表示抱歉。
第二段,不能送行的原因:在上周球队训练中发生意外受伤住院,这周日计划手术治疗。
第三段,表达自己的祝福:希望回国之后能继续保持联系,预祝飞行一切顺利。
第二步:列重点词语,词组(注意好词的使用)
如:see sb. off, promise, by accident, in hospital, be scheduled to, have an operation on, keep in touch with等
第三步:连词成句(注意好句型的使用,如非谓语动词,复合句,注意拼写和时态问题)
如:I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am not able to see you off at the airport this Saturday as what I have promised to you等
第四步:连句成篇(注意衔接词的使用)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also)
3.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。
第五步:润色修改。