【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单 词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Miss White is our English teacher. She always impresses us deep with her lively English classes. One day when the first bell ring, our monitor said, "Our English teacher is said to have an operation today. Whoever will give us the lesson has not been decided yet. " The class fell silent at his word. In fact, we were afraid of that Miss White would no longer be with us. Just at that moment, Miss White entered the classroom, look tired and pale. " I'll be missing you badly," she said at a low voice. "My operation will be put off till tomorrow though I don't want you to miss a single class. ” She went on, “A new teacher will take my place tomorrow I'll come back as soon as possible. "Hearing this, we were both moved to tears. What a good teacher she is!
在线课程【答案】1.deep→deeply
2.ring→rang
3.Whoever→Who
4.word→words
5.去掉of
6.look→looking
7.at→in/with
8.though→because / as / since
9. tomorrow后加and
10.both →all
【解析】
这是一篇记叙文。作者在文章中讲述了一位他们都很喜欢的英语老师怀特小姐。
1.考查副词。句意:她生动活泼的英语课总是给我们留下深刻的印象。分析句子,deep的词性为形容词,不可被动词impress修饰,用副词修饰动词。故将deep改为deeply。
2.考查时态。句意:一天,当第一次铃响时。分析句子,描述发生在过去的事情,用一般过去时。在一般过去时中,用动词的过去式。故将ring改为rang。
3.考查名词性从句。句意:谁给我们上课还没有被决定。分析句子,主语从句部分缺主语,应用连接代词,句意缺“谁”之意。故将Whoever 改为Who。
4.考查名词复数。句意:听了他的话,全班安静下来。分析句子,word 此处表示“话”是可数名词,要用复数。故将word改为words。
5.考查固定短语。句意:事实上,我们担心怀特小姐将不再与我们在一起。分析句子,be afraid of后接doing的形式,但此处是从句。所以应用be afraid that。故of 多余,应去掉。
6.考查非谓语动词。句意:就在这时,怀特小姐走进了教室,她看上去疲惫而苍白。分析句子,look所处分句无主语,所以此处需用非谓语动词。look与其逻辑主语Miss White之间是主动关系,用现在分词短语作伴随状语。故将look改为looking.
7.考查介词。句意:我会非常想念你们的。”她低声说。分析句子,in/with a low voice 译为 低声说,此处是固定搭配。故将at 改为in / with。
8.考查连词。句意:我的手术将推迟到明天,因为我不想让你们错过一节课。分析句子,根据句意,此处前后表示因果关系。故将though改为because / as / since。
9.考查连词。句意:明天将有一位新老师来接替我,我将尽快回来。分析句子,A new teacher will take my place tomorrow和I'll come back as soon as possible之间必须用连词将两个简单句连接起来,此处表示并列关系。故要在tomorrow 和I 之间加and。
10.考查代词。句意:听到这些,我们都感动得流下了眼泪。分析句子,句子的both表示两者都,但是此处的we指同学们,应指三者或三者以上都。故将both改为all。