请根据以下提示.结合你生活中的一个事例.用英语写一篇短文.We all know that Chances favor the prepared mind . Only if you are well

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【题目】请根据以下提示,结合你生活中的一个事例,用英语写一篇短文。

We all know that "Chances favor the prepared mind". Only if you are well prepared, will you be able to seize them.

注意: 1.无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语。

2.除诗歌外,文体不限。

3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学习名称。

4.词数不少于120词。

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【答案】

There is no denying that we are eager for golden chances to be successful in life.However, many people are not aware that chances are always for those who get well prepared.I didn’t realize it until I went to high school.

Soon after I became a senior one student, a singing competition was to be held in school.I love singing but I was very shy then and had never sung at the top of my voice in public.I could only sing to myself most of the time.Somehow, I wanted to have a try.When I talked about it with my parents, they inspired me to follow my inner voice and told me as long as I got well prepared, I would make it.With their encouragement, I became confident and practiced hard after class.Sometimes, I would turn to my music teacher for help.When I felt I was ready, the day came.Standing on the stage, I took a deep breath and began to sing with my full emotions.It turned out that I won the first prize .

This experience has taught me a precious lesson in my life.If you are not successful yet, most probably you haven’t been well prepared.Once you have, chances will surely favor you.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇议论文的写作。阐述机会只给有准备的人,结合生活中的事例分析原因。注意观点明确,条理清晰。时态:用一般现在时。结构上,注意依据提示列举生活中的事例叙述,使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。

【亮点说明】There is no denying that,are eager for,not…until, as long as, turn to sb. for help等词组使文章更生动;With their encouragement, I becameconfident and practiced hard after class.使用with的复合结构;Standing on the stage, I took a deep breath and began to sing with my full emotions.使用现在分词作状语。If you are not successful yet, most probably you haven’t been well prepared.If引导的条件句。It turned out that…句型使文章更有水平。文章的安排分为三部分,开头部分:开门见山地简单阐述提示。正文部分:结合生活中事例。结尾部分:简要总结,发表自己的观点。