“实行低碳经济 .“过低碳生活 .现在已经成为了人们关注的热门话题.最近.你们班的同学就这个话题展开了热烈的讨论.请你根据下表提供的信息.给21st century 写篇文章.报道你们班级的讨论情况.

高中英语 2024-07-28 06:45:41

【题目】“实行低碳经济”,“过低碳生活”,现在已经成为了人们关注的热门话题。最近,你们班的同学就这个话题展开了热烈的讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息,给21st century 写篇文章,报道你们班级的讨论情况。

为什么要“实行低碳经济”

1. 工厂排放有害物,人类活动产生大量二氧化碳,污染严重,环境恶化。

2. 随着人口的增长,自然资源将会耗尽

过低碳生活如何“从我做起”

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注意: 1. 对所给要点,逐一陈述,适当发挥。字数120左右。

2. 开头已经写好,不计入总字数。

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【答案】

Nowadays, carrying out low carbon economy and living a low carbon life has been a hot topic. Recently our class had a heated discussion about it.

Through the discussion, we are fully aware of the necessity of carrying out a low carbon economy in our country. Factories have been producing large numbers of harmful chemicals. Meanwhile, human activities also let off carbon gases. As a consequence, all these contribute a lot to serious environmental pollution. What’s worse, with the increase of the population, natural resources will run out.

We all think it is our duty to live a low carbon life, so my classmates put forward the following suggestions about how to live a low carbon life. First, we are supposed to save every bit of water and electricity. Besides, we should appeal to the people around us to make contributions to creating a green homeland. We are confident that with our combined efforts, our life will make a great difference.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见短语let off释放;What’s worse糟糕的是;put forward提出;appeal to sb to do 呼吁某人做某事;Nowadays, carrying out low carbon economy and living a low carbon life has been a hot topic这个句子运用到动名词做主语;We all think it is our duty to live a low carbon life, so my classmates put forward the following suggestions about how to live a low carbon life这个句子it做形式主语,真正的主语是后面的不定式;