假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误.每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ).并在其下面写出该加的

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Kate,

How are you? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you. I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further educations. One hundred and twenty students took exams for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. They can’t imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me study in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue living with them. How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?

Yours,

Jane

【答案】

【1】去掉a

【2】have been offered

【3】education

【4】were chosen

【5】strongly

【6】so far away

【7】去掉of

【8】living alone

【9】 to study 或me 改成I

【10】the fact 后加that

【解析】

【1】去掉a 考查冠词。news消息，是不可数名词，前面不加冠词，故把a去掉

【2】have been offered 考查被动语态。I与offer是动宾关系，即我被提供奖学金，应该用现在完成时的被动形式have been done，故在have后加been。

【3】educations----education 考查名词。 Education教育是不可数名词。

【4】were chosen 考查主谓一致。a few指一些人，修饰可数名词复数，故把was改为were

【5】strongly 考查副词。be against反对，应该用副词strongly“强烈地”来修饰，故把strong改为strongly

【6】too---so 考查固定句型。so...that...如此......以至于......，故把too改为so

【7】去掉of 考查动词短语 。句意：他们害怕我会孤独。Be afraid that。后面加句子 而be afraid of 后面加名词或动名词。

【8】living alone 考查动词的用法。Imagine sb doing 想象某人做某事；

【9】加 to study 考查 动词 的用法 。advise sb to do 建议某人某做事；

【10】the fact 后加that 考查同位语从句；Fact后跟that引导的同位语从句，对fact解释说明，故把what改为that