请根据以下提示.并结合事例.用英语写一篇短文.We all know that “Silence is golden , but in most cases, good communication c

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【题目】请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。

We all know that “Silence is golden”, but in most cases, good communication can help wipe out misunderstanding and build a good relationship.

注意:①无须写标题;

②除诗歌外,文体不限;

③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例;

④文中不得透露个人的姓名和学校名称;

⑤词数不少于120字,如引用提示语,则不计入总词数。

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【答案】

One possible version:

As is universally acknowledged, good communication is what it takes to build a harmonious relationship.

When it comes to this, unforgettable memories crowd in my mind. One day, I was about to go home after school when it rained cats and dogs. Without an umbrella, I called my deskmate walking in the rain at a distance to share hers, but she didn’t stop. From then on, every time she tried to talk to me, I turned aroud and ignored her, assuming that she did it on purpose. Things didn’t get better until I found a message saying “whatever happened, please let me know. We are more friends than deskmates.” Only then did I realize I misunderstood her, so I rushed to talk with her and make an apology without hesitation, which contributed to a much stronger friendship between us.

If she hadn’t left me a message and if I had kept silent all the time, I would have lost a best friend. It is good communication that has wiped out our misunderstanding, thus saving our friendship.

【解析】

试题分析:本文是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意:无须写标题;除诗歌外,文体不限;内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例;文中不得透露个人的姓名和学校名称;词数不少于120字,如引用提示语,则不计入总词数。

亮点说明:本文直接提出观点,段落1:有一个旗帜鲜明的漂亮的过渡句。段落2:叙述一个结构严谨、主题鲜明的个人经历的故事。段落3:夯实观点,要有一个漂亮的结论句,最好有一个具有启示指导意义的延伸句。