假定你是李华.正在美国的阿肯色州中部城市Little Rock 读书.想在这个暑假里找一份饭店服务员的工作.下面的广告引起了你的注意.请你给联系人写一封信.询问相关情况.信中需说明你的问题.Serve
【题目】假定你是李华，正在美国的阿肯色州中部城市Little Rock 读书，想在这个暑假里找一份饭店服务员的工作。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请你给联系人写一封信，询问相关情况。信中需说明你的问题（广告下方已列出）。
Server Wanted Contact: Joseph Smith City: Little Rock Post Code: 72223 Posted in: Little Rock Restaurant Jobs JOB PURPOSE: The primary purpose of this position is to create a unique and personal experience for Buffalo Wild Wings’ guests by effectively presenting food and drink options in a friendly and enthusiastic manner. |
Your questions:
1. Height and age limitation? 2. Working experience?
3. Spare-time or full-time? 4. Days per week?
5. Pay?
注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连续。
参考词汇：服务员，侍者 server
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
在线课程【答案】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, a Chinese student studying in Little Rock. I happened to read your ad for a server in a newspaper and I am interested in it. But I still have a few questions about it, so I am writing the letter to you.
Firstly, I am a boy of 17, and I am not sure whether you have special requirements about height and age. Secondly, I have no working experience, for I am just a high school student. Thirdly, I wonder whether it is a spare-time job or a full-time one. In addition, I am eager to know how many days I’ll work per week and how much the pay is.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：本文是一篇书信体裁的书面表达，要注意以下几点：1、注意书信的格式，而且书信的语言要简洁明了，开门见山提出写信的目的。2、根据提示内容可知文章要包括要询问的五个方面，也就是五个要点，即工作有没有限制；是否需要工作经验；是兼职工作还是全职；每周工作的天数和薪水等问题。3、文章要使用一般现在时，使用第一人称。4、写信时语言要自然流畅，礼貌委婉，在内容方面可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，为了提高档次还要注意句式的变换。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达格式正确，要点全面，语言自然流畅。首先作者开门见山说明自己对工作感兴趣，用But I still have a few questions about it, so I am writing the letter to you作为过渡提出自己关心的问题，在表述时使用了firstly，secondly，thirdly和in addition等连接词，这样使文章内容很有层次性。同时，作者还使用了并列句I am a boy of 17, and I am not sure whether you have special requirements about height and age和I have no working experience,for I am just a high school student.，宾语从句I wonder whether it is a spare-time job or a full-time one.等多种表达方式，增加了文章的亮点。
