请以“My Ideal Job 为题.用英语写一篇短文.内容包括:自己的理想职业,这个职业必备的性格特征,努力学习.实现目标.

【题目】请以“My Ideal Job”为题，用英语写一篇短文。内容包括：自己的理想职业；这个职业必备的性格特征；努力学习，实现目标。

【答案】

My Ideal Job

When I was still a little child, I hoped that I could be a teacher in the future. For so many years, I have been eager to teach lovely children.

Being a teacher calls for wonderful personalities, such as patience, unselfishness, communication ability, creativity, carefulness and so on. As you know, I am a patient and diligent girl. I am not only unselfish and creative, but also I can express myself clearly and freely. I think I possess the qualities of a good teacher.

Right now I am still a middle school student. I am working hard at my lessons so that I can learn more and can be admitted to a famous university in the future. Therefore, I am qualified to be a good teacher in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲式作文。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等

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